Once again I’ve started dancing
She says ballet’s good for the soul
The muscles slowly remember
But there’s no time to remember
spirits past, future or present while dancing
Full concentration! Maximum participation! Ignore the soul!
But perhaps my soul
does remember
Even while body and mind focus on dancing
Surely the soul must always remember dancing?
I’m giving National/Global Poetry Writing Month (NaPoWriMo / GloPoWriMo) a go – write one poem, per day throughout April. Today’s prompt/challenge was to write a tritina. A tritina involves three, three-line stanzas, and a final concluding line. Three “end words” are used to conclude the lines of each stanza, in a set pattern of ABC, CAB, BCA, and all three end words appear in the final line. This was a good challenge! 🙂
That sounds like a tough challenge (the poem structure), well done!
Thanks! I’ve been doing this poem this for a week now. I love it. So cool to learn about different forms of poems too.
great poem !
Nice work. “You only love when your soul remembers” – Prince Rogers Nelson.