Spring arrives
warm and
sudden
like new love-
the excitement
inside
like the way I felt
about Newtown
in the 90s
that fizz of desire
almost-anxious butterfly fire
Spring arrives
like lust,
like an ardent paramour
Spring writhes and
turns
hot
like Summer
I lived in Newtown in the 90s! Perhaps we passed on the street?? I SO know what you mean using that image :))) Thanks for giving me a flashback, G (in Byron Bay now)
It was a special time and place! 🙂 I have family living near Brunz… lovely part of the world… arrrh jealous!
Yeah, someone has to live here in Paradise… may as well be me (& your family too 😎🌴)
What a lovely poem of spring
Perhaps I should try to do a thing
But I am really bad with words
I sound like a bad old records
Nobody wants to listen to
But I will try to do this for you
I love your poem of spring
It makes me want to dance and sing!
I hope you like it!😘
Brilliant! I love when people reply to poems with poems, it makes me very happy 🙂
I don´t know anything about Newtown in the 90s, but the “the excitement inside” that´s exactly what I love about spring!
I can feel a lot of vibes through that poem. Like that play ‘cat on a hot tin roof’!
What a wonderful play! I’m flattered by the mention x
Beautiful! You’ve captured the essence of spring so well… that’s how I feel about the season too, spring gives me a belly-flip like finding a new love!
thank-you 🙂