I think the problems
are the bad things ?
I think the strengths weak
oh, cut the strings
Talk, talk, talk, talk
feels like a beginning
but it’s banter, chatter, nothing-muchof
saying ‘I am’ is not winning
It’s all fused like
a mangled globe of light
don’t hide it under a bushel, love!
but what if/ the bad things/ the bad thoughts/ the bad strengths/ the bad weaks/ the bad weeks/ the bad strings
Soundcloud link: https://soundcloud.com/user-808707280/recording-125
Very nice – some intriguing questions – good-bad/strong-weak – and great to hear your reading.
“the bad weaks/ the bad weeks”
This line gives me all sorts of writer-happies ❤
It was my fave bit too, haha! Also interesting from a spoken/written perpective