all the white horses were spooked today
under a cloud-scudded mackerel sky
cows sat down in the odd warm wind
waiting for autumn to arrive
knowing nothing more
than studded stones and asphalt smooth
step, step, stepping stubborness
running blind in forest-dark groves
could not remember
as boots pulled up to knees
back to summer, and a paper-bag skirt
what
how
who
I’d decided to be
This is really good! I liked your word interruptions like “step step stepping,” and your tie-in to the changing weather.
Thankyou! X