As I slope up that bone-colour concrete path
sticks and gumleaves and sand
the scent of the bush – lemon eucalpypt and banksia
alone for the first time in days
home but not home
that smell in my eyes maybe because they fill with tears
or I’m thinking of him trapped inside delerium
grey-green and olive green and agapanthus green and black-burnt trunks with
small explosions of scarlet tongues and creamed-butter ragged tulle blossoms
following paths I’ve never run before
the warm air holds me safe and not too hot
thinking of how I heard he quietly saved his son once from a precipice
the way you do with family, unhesitating, sure as a heatbeat
those old trees stand tall, smooth barked and guarding
not over me, their roots luxuriate in more ancient soil
can you ever reconcile
a life, a mind, a body, a soul
or illness
or just keep jogging on
Day 4 prompt was: to write a poem that is about something abstract – perhaps an ideal like “beauty” or “justice,” but which discusses or describes that abstraction in the form of relentlessly concrete nouns. I found the example poem by Amy Tudor in this piece so moving I guess I tried to mimic the style, I think it worked well to focus on trees and flowers etc.
I might not be able to link to the prompts each day as I´m mostly working via smartphone at the moment so cutting and pasting and link making is a bit of a faff… but you can always check in to http://www.napowrimo.net
Dear Claire,
Perfect and moving. Lovely.
Avr
Thankyou Avril, i would’ve loved to work on this a bit more but daily poem so… ! X
Movingly beautiful. Thank you for writing
Thankyou for reading!
Great imagery and I could relate very much to the “home but not home” line…